It’s A LOT more regimented, and rule defined than you think, and a LOT easier to fuck up with any given partner. Take that into account, because it’s part of that lifestyle. DYNAMIC! This means she CHOOSES to be a submissive, and frankly WANTS to be. I don’t care that she’s more “experienced” (which can read town door knob, so it’s not exactly fucking flattering one way or the other – and you should think about that before you use phrasing at all that implies she’s got more power, if you intend HER to come off as suddenly sub) SHE is in the submissive position. There is NO POINT to adding a “continue dominance/BJ + Content” option to the FIRST scene you did with Aurora – only for her to IMMEDIATELY turn the fucking tables and Dominate HIM. Next do not under ANY circumstance imply that the MC is a “minute man” for or with ANY of girls. I won’t care, as that’s SUPPOSED to be – a bullshit excuse quite frankly – for her Which is NOT how it should be with NTR off. In that context, it seems like you’re saying CLAIRE is the dominant. My main problems with the current run now are two fold really.įirst: Your headings read “Claire Domination.” So the question is – which. That is about the ONE thing you did smart. Okay, first… I will laud the fact that while you have removed all of Claire’s NTR you do seem to be willing to allow the MC to pursue the other females.
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